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Alright guys, Sorry I haven't coming to the site. Between working on a new site and overwhelming amounts work, I haven't been doing this place justice. Alright so the break is keeping me from using the net as much as I can (or need) so I want this site's revival to be effective.

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PostSubject: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 6th 2009, 9:05 pm

Name: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora 


Age: 27 


Race: Hylian (Cursed)

Gender: Male


Sage Element: Water


Lore of Power: Lake Hylia Lakebed Temple(Water Temple)


Previous Appereance: Atlas memory sometimes fails when he tries to recall how he used to look though he remembers he used to have a long, untidy and dirty white hair that used to be teased when he was but a child. He used to be skinny almost malnourished though he was fast, for he had to be if he planned on getting his food; his clothes were dirty and torn and had an unpleasant smell he had gotten accustomed but every time he tries to remember his features, he finds he no longer can.

Cursed Appearance: Atlas is roughly 6’ feet high and has a slim yet muscular body, his skin has a grayish blue tinge which is caused by his scales and the reflection of the light. The front part of his body but mostly his stomach is a lighter color than the rest of it and he has the pointed face that is typical of a zora though his deep-blue eyes are not as rounded as the other zoras which gives him a determined expression. He wears a tight white sleeveless shirt and short dark brown pants, also he uses a special type of dark brown shoes that provide comfort and durability since his feet weren’t made to walk on uneven and rough terrain for long periods of time, on his head he has a black bandana which makes all of his hair, which are actually tendrils though they are white rather than blue which is common to all zora, remain out of his face at all times. On both sides of his pants he has two daggers which are longer than the average daggers but not big enough to be considered short-swords which he uses when his fins don’t do the trick, the daggers are jagged around it's slightly outward bending blade and the hilt is crafted with black onyx and the intricate design is adorned with crystal blue topaz to give it a deadly beauty which the smith saw fit for it's wielder. His body is covered with various scars; he fights without armor, saying that he hasn’t found a single armor that allows him to fight unencumbered, and in combat he prefers fast and fluid motions rather than sluggishly strong attacks. His most noticeable scars are the one on his face in the shape of a fallen cross which are actually two different scars one that goes vertically down the whole length of his nose ending just above the upper lip and the other one that reaches from below his right eye starting from the middle of it to the end of the left eye; the other one is on his chest that goes from the left upper side of his chest and with a slight angle reaches the bottom half of the right side of his stomach just below the belly-button. On his back he wears a dark brown bag in which he carries everything he might need to survive in the wilderness or when there is no money to afford and inn, everything he has ever hold dear is in that bag so he takes especially good care of it though the bad thing is that it is much to heavy for him to hold while fighting so he leaves it on the floor whenever he fights so it's been taken quite a few times by bandits though they never take more than 20 steps before they are cut down by his daggers. Strapped to the shoulder strap of the backpack there is an ocarina, this ocarina was a present from Maya when he left the Zora kingdom saying that whenever he missed her or the kingdom he should sit down and play it which always helped him gain his resolve again. The ocarina is light blue in color and is slimmer than the normal ocarina which makes the sound more high-pitched, also the mouthpiece is a darker color and carved on it is the zora's crest which is painted in black, behind the ocarina is carved a message saying "No matter where, no matter when remember this will always be your home -Maya" which made him smile whenever he reads it.

Personality: Atlas always keeps his cool, never rushing into battle but rather likes to discuss things before taking a definite action especially if that action will affect other people besides him though this wasn’t always so. Though he is calm, he can be quite aggressive when the need arises and will never back off of a challenge. Atlas is very prideful and anything that might insult his honor will have to face his wrath head on and also he is very protective, he fights to protect that which is good and defeat that which isn’t, he never ignores his duties and he will do what he must to fulfill them even if that puts his life at risk. Atlas is not quick to trust but once you have gained his friendship you will have a friend that will watch your back in any situation. Atlas likes to sometimes lay back and enjoy the simple pleasures of the world as long as there is nothing of importance to hold his attention but if he can will sometimes stop abruptly and think of that which he loves and left behind or even lie down and watch the clouds and wonder what it would be like to fly in the sky.

General Abilities: Atlas is very proficient in the use of daggers and short blades which he uses in pairs since it is an extension to him as his fins are, he is a very quick and agile fighter able to fight for long periods of time without exhaustion since the years he has spent swimming has given him a vast amount of stamina. He likes to fight up-close and personal dispatching his enemies by quickly stabbing them in the small crevices that are the joints of their armor since his Zora eyes allow him to see clearly than with his normal hylian vision; also he is nimble enough to use acrobatics in his fighting style, twisting and turning his body in different ways and when his swords-daggers begin to slow him down he uses his fins as a lighter extension but after a while they WILL begin to hurt him as well. He is also very good at hiding and moving through shadows; the years he spent eating ad stealing in the streets, though those days are long forgotten to him, have endowed him with that particular ability. His body also can produce electricity due to his zora physiology which allows him to discharge the static electricity in his body in a burst of electromagnetic energy, this energy depending on the strength of it can cause metal to magnetize which is always helpful to stick various enemies together by their armor or sometimes if Atlas charges it enough he can create an electromagnetic pulse which can stun and enemy from afar or even disrupt the electric impulses in their brain making them hallucinate. Using that ability repeteadly can tire him and even make him faint since his body cannot deal with all the electric impulses cursing throughout his body. The time he spent living with the zoras helped him to overcome his fear of swimming and he even became known as the fastest swimmer in the land of hyrule which to him was a great honor; also Maya taugh him how to play the ocarina saying that it would help him to relax whenever he felt distressed and so far she had been right.

History: This young man’s story begins longer ago than a young man’s story should and that is because he is not a young man at all; frozen in time one might say that this kid is, by a curse he no longer recalls even going as far as questioning whether he truly was a hylian once though there is no doubt about his heritage. Atlas was born a hylian “living” in Hyrule castle town though living isn’t truly what one might call that kind of existence, he was born in an alleyway to unknown parents who disposed of him as soon as they could muster the chance to leave him and they never turned back not even to glance at their newborn son cry for his mommy. His young existence was saved thanks to an old couple who took him as their son though they were soon gone from his life before he reached the age of 6, leaving as completely alone as he had been when he was born. He soon learned that people were not interested in the life of a kid and the other kids mocked him for his strange hair color saying he was a ghost and so he came to resent them and their carefree way of life. He had to learn to find his food and so he scavenged people’s trash trying to find anything edible though seldom he found something like that so he had to settle for the meager scraps of spoiled food he could find. This type of food was harmful to him and so, for the sake of his health, he had to stop eating it though this left him without a source of food and he was quickly becoming desperate. One day while he was walking through the market still hearing the almost inaudible teases of “Look it’s a ghost” from the local kids in town he saw a street vendor selling apples was busy talking to a customer and he could not help but take one apple, the vendor none the wiser remained speaking to his customer as Atlas made his way to savor the juicy red apple which had become his prize though what he so liked the most about it was that it was fresh and this was how Atlas began to learn about the trade that would save him from starvation in future years.

Atlas was a young man now, 16 years of age and still living in the streets though he had now become very proficient in making himself almost invisible in the shadows taking his nickname of "Ghost" to heart striking the vendor's stalls before they even noticed something was gone. Though he continued living in the streets he now had enough skill and greed to look for other things than food and so he began to steal clothes which only helped him blend in more since he no longer looked all ragged up in torn clothes. One day he was caught by the town guards when he thought he had successfully stolen a piece of dry meat he had planned to eat later in the night but now captured and in chains he was to remain there for only a day, the guard wanted to show the kid the severity of his actions and make him repent and Atlas acted accordingly easily manipulating him into believing his story. When he was released, he was confront by a young man who seemed rather wealthy and noble though his mocking grin did not match his appearance; the man presented himself as Gyne, a thief who learned how to live the good life off of the "rich folk" as he used to call them. He proposed a partnership with Atlas, one that would benefit the both of them since he said that he had potential, he was nimble and quiet which were traits Gyne knew to be valuable and thus they began to work together. Atlas was no longer a petty thief stealing scraps for a living, he now acted in accordance with a client's wishes and stole whatever it was that they wanted, for a fee of course.

Atlas job was exactly what brought him to his current predicament, he had learned to live in the streets and he knew how hard it as to no have money so he simply could not say no that job. He had been working with Gyne for almost a four years now even going as far as considering him his own brother who always looked after him but though he had great care for him, he despised Gyne's ruthlessness. Atlas had turned hot-headed and impatient in his line of wok but even he knew how to restrain himself whenever he was working on a big job but Gyne sometimes lost control, even going as far as killing people who had got on his way. One day a very big and very fat man came with a contract, "I want a mask" he had said and he offered them a very big sum of money that they could not possibly pass up so they said yes though they wondered what was the cash for his simplistic job that didn't seem to hold no challenge at all. The man said that the mask belonged to an old yet very powerful wizard and it was said to hold great power in it one that could even transform a man, Atlas was not interested in the power but in the large sum of money the man had given them and he said that with their return more would await for them so they head off into the night traveling until they found the secluded house which belonged to the wizard. The house was dark and no one seemed to be inside and so they quietly picked the lock making sure not to make any sound when they entered the darkened halls and they felt their way around the house looking for the mask, "You will know which mask it is when you see it, that old senile will probably place it in the most important place in his collection," yet they still could not find it. When they entered the next room it was wide, even wider than the whole house it seemed, and round with masks all surrounding the walls and there in the middle it lay;a mask with two horns on top and four on each side of it, the eyes were big and orange almost hypnotic and it was an overall purple color.

Gyne approached it slowly with his hand extended towards it and a greedy look on his face as he licked his lips with hunger, "Mine, all mine" he said as Atlas approached him, "What the hell are you talking about!? Let's take the mask and go!" he whispered next to him but Gyne was entranced by it and as he approached it, the old wizard knocked them both back with magic and Atlas smacked against the wall hitting his head and losing consciousness. When he woke up he saw Gyne's blade in the old man's neck before he sliced it, the dead body fell limply on the floor with a thud and after shaking his blade to clean the blood he sheathed it without any remorse at all on his face, in fact only hunger lay in his eyes. "Power, the fat man said, great power and it's all mine!" and as he said this his face displayed such a maniacal grin that the man seemed to have almost lost his mind. "They made fun of me, despised me and pushed me around but I killed them and took EVERYTHING from them..." Atlas suddenly stood up trying to stop his friend from losing his mind but somehow everything seemed strange to him, the world seemed a clearer place as his eyes became accustomed to the little light there was in the room and he somehow seemed...taller. He moved towards his friend and his movements were clumsy, which was very unlike him, but when his friend turned towards him his expression changed to that of confusion as he said "Who are you? No matter you're just another dead body to me" and he slashed Atlas' chest with his sword. Atlas memories fail him after that, he did not know how he reached it but when he woke up he found himself to be in the kingdom of the Zoras of which he had only heard of in his life.

He had been found in the river by the Zoras and brought back to their domain where he was taken care off by them, he wondered why they would go out of their way for an injured hylian but when the King Zora appeared before him his face becoming stunned by Atlas appearance he knew that something was wrong. When he raised his hand and saw the blue tinge it now was he screamed, he did not know what had happened to him but he had been turned into a zora. The king hugged him and said "I'm glad you're alive, son" and Atlas was stunned, he was an exact replica of the king's son whom had years earlier left the kingdom in search of adventure. Atlas was baffled, everyone thought he was the prince and they all hugged and cheered for him and though he knew that it was all a mistake he could not help but feel awfully content with this. Soon he had met Maya, a young zora woman who seemed to have had a close relationship with the prince, this woman knew from the moment she met him that he was not the prince and Atlas begged her to allow him to tell everyone the truth and after a while of pleading she agreed. He tried unsuccessfully to remove the mask which had transformed him into that which he now was but somehow it never budged; the magic that had transformed him was ancient and believed to be long forgotten but to him it was but a minor problem, he had begun to enjoy being a zora and living with them and he had no urge to return to his former life. Atlas after a while of living with them told the king the truth, he thought he was going to be banished from the kingdom but the king only smiled, "I've known that for quite some time now, but your presence gives people hope...it's been a while since I've seen them so happy and besides....you and he are very much alike" Atlas was happy that he had been accepted by the king and thus he continued living with them peacefully, learning their way of life and the inner peace they all seem to have. He was renowned as a fast swimmer in the kingdom and his ability with a blade did not go unnoticed which only served to feed his new found pride but still after a while he too wished to go on an adventure, he knew that out there in the world there were some bad things that could threaten to destroy the way of life of these peaceful zora and bowed to do all he could to prevent that. He also wanted to know what had happened to Gyne, since no one could ever tell him the whole story of how he had reached the river he thought that maybe there was something he didn’t know. Atlas and Maya had grown close, almost like a brother and sisterly relationship as she taught him everything there was to know about the race though there was always a kind of awkwardness between them since he looked so much like the prince she had grown to love though they both held much love and care for one another. He had spoken to her about his decision to leave and he knew he had to tell her and the king since he had begun to think of the king as his father even adopting the last name of Zora by the king's demands but he knew that he would never rest easy as long as he continued with them and thus he set out but with a promise to come back to that place where he belonged.

A few years had passed and Atlas still continued his search, he had grown more determined wit every battle even going as far as dulling each and every blade which he had own since the beginning of his travels. The daggers he bought all weren’t suitable for him and the fighting style he had begun to develop as he fought since the quick thrusts through armor made the blades misshape quickly. One day he saved an old man from a band of bandits, dispatching them quickly but yet again his blades were rendered useless. The old man turned out to be the master smith, the blacksmith to the king himself who offered to give him better daggers that would never break or bent under his use and the man did not lie to him. The blades had never failed him, soon becoming a natural extension of his body and a companion through his travels, he was going to find all that was evil and defeat it and return home to Maya and all the other zora's waiting for him but even he did not know how long and how hard the trail would be to the place where his legend began.


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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 6th 2009, 9:35 pm

Snapples now I got to get on mine. And what's up with the epic royal names going on here.
Also I'm not sure if you're aware of this but Zora's have the power emit energy in water such as electricity. Yes they are like human eels. Just like Aqua Birds are water alchemist and water storage creatures.
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 6th 2009, 9:43 pm

Ohh I didn't know that but thanks and well I was thinking of maybe making him Princess Ruto's son or something like that jeje but I'm still working on it...
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 6th 2009, 9:56 pm

Yeah and I also felt the need to make a game connection with my name to. So far Kenny is the only one to figure it out. Although I gave him a HUGE clue.
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 7th 2009, 2:38 am

Umm... Your first middle name is the middle name the King of Hyrule from Wind Waker. Right?
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 7th 2009, 6:14 am

Well if you meant Cadfael it actually means "battle prince" in welsh so i didn't make it with the king of hyrule thing in mind since I didn't really remember that...
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 7th 2009, 6:54 am

Oh I was talking to Aniki. "Nohansen" Sorry
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 7th 2009, 7:17 am

Well oops, my bad!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 22nd 2009, 4:18 am

so, would that make you the creature from the black lagoon?
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 23rd 2009, 4:44 am

what would make me a creature from the black lagoon?
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 24th 2009, 9:00 pm

Um...that would just make him a Zora XD. And Nee-chan figured it out Surprised

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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 25th 2009, 6:11 am

A creepy fish creature/fish man... and you are indeed a fishman... so creature from the black lagoon...
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   September 25th 2009, 6:36 pm

Zoras differ greatly from your idea of the creature from the Black Lagoon XD
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   October 1st 2009, 6:41 am

Holy crap!!! I think you have enough history there... But wow, it sounds very interesting...
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PostSubject: Re: Atlas Cadfael Lethonious Zora (Water)   October 1st 2009, 8:19 am

NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...........


I can see why you wanted to know if you needed to use content from other games other than Orcarina of Time. And very unique. You're a Hylian that has become a Zora. Um...It wasn't highlighted upon if only a little in Majora's Mask but Zoras have ability to generate electricity from their bodies. I suppose I'll need to start a Race Topic in the Encyclopedia.
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