Eisan Skygge Impara- Sage of Shadows; The Beginning (incomplete)

okay, I obviously am not finished, but I want to put it here so everyone can tell me wat they think so far. This is also a continuation of my history, since my history presents a unique circumstance...


As Eisan slept he found himself in one of the most unbelievable yet shockingly realistic dreams he had ever witnessed. He dreamed he was on the hillside looking over Kakariko village. It seemed peaceful, flawless, and like heaven on earth. From where he stood he could see children at play, families having picnics in the fields at the forsts edge. At this point it had seemed nothing had changed since he was imprisoned, had he been imprisoned? or had it all been a terrible nightmare? In that same instant the view that he described as heaven like suddenly became hell on earth. He could see soldiers rushing through the forest toward the village. The villagers didn't seem to notice the danger that was quickly aproaching them. So he ran, ran as fast as he could to try and warn the villagers of the soldiers closing in. With there swords drawn and there bows at the ready, they were well prepared to slaughter everyone they encountered on .